Erika Steeves, a fiction editor—specializing in science fiction, horror, and speculative fiction—with over a decade of experience, gives her take on the benefits of hiring an expert:
“Although it’s not necessary to work with a professional editor before authors start querying, I think getting a partial or full copyedit can be really beneficial.
Agents are poring through so many submissions. Making sure your manuscript isn’t riddled with errors and inconsistencies will give you a leg up in terms of first impressions and giving you more opportunities for them to request to read the full manuscript. It’ll also help showcase your storytelling and characters if readers aren’t stumbling and distracted by surface problems.
Again, it’s not necessary to go through a whole copyedit—because publishers will go through the process again anyways once they accept the manuscript—but just getting the agent to see the potential in your story is how you get through this stage of the querying process. That’s why I recommend, if possible, getting whatever pages you’ll be sending to an agent copyedited. It can also be helpful to get your query letter looked at as well.
Another benefit is the learning experience of working with a copyeditor for a partial edit. That way authors can apply the sorts of edits to the rest of their manuscript.”
Steeves has worked with querying authors before in a few different capacities. When asked to describe what she does for authors looking for literary agents she said:
“Querying authors have come to me when they start querying, or when an agent has asked to read more of their manuscript. In these cases, I typically copyedit the first 50 or so pages of their novel so that they have the best chance of making a great first impression. I’m copyediting mainly for mechanics and consistency—anything that would draw the reader out of the story and make it difficult for them to stay immersed.
Especially with agents, or anyone reading through a pile of submissions, it’s extremely important to keep their attention. Although they don’t expect the manuscript to be fully edited, it’s just a better experience to read a manuscript that’s as clean as possible.”
Michelle Meade, an editor who worked in-house at a traditional publisher for over ten years before going freelance, believes writers usually don’t need an editor before submitting their work.
“I don’t generally recommend getting professional copyediting (and especially not proofreading) before submitting to literary agents, but this advice has qualifiers. Here’s the thing: if your novel is going to attract an agent and then go on to get a publishing deal, part of that deal includes professional editing in-house (from developmental edits all the way to proofreading). In the same way that I never want writers to pay for line/copy edits before or at the same time as developmental edits (because the whole POINT of dev edits is that substantive changes are going to be made, rendering the technical edits mostly moot), it’s a waste of money to pay for copy edits when there’s still so much that might change once you land an agent. The other thing to remember is that proofreading should be done on a final, typeset manuscript, so that’s definitely not one I’d suggest getting ahead of time.
Now for the caveat: what you definitely want to avoid is querying with an error-filled manuscript. However (and this is a big however), I still don’t think this is when hiring a CE is a good idea. If your writing is at a place where you’re not clear on the grammatical and technical basics to self-edit and eliminate obvious errors, I would say the question isn’t, “Should I invest in a copy edit?” but rather, “How can I improve my writing skills and knowledge to level up my pages?” I’m not saying you have to be a perfect writer when it comes to the technical stuff, but you should have enough of a grasp of the basic rules that your writing is clear, straightforward, and not filled with typos. Writing is a job, and it comes with a required skill set, just like any other career. If your dream is to be traditionally published, then you should be willing to put in the work required to meet those skills, especially when these are skills that can be worked on for free.”
When asked if she found that most submitted manuscripts to her publishing house had been through a copyedit or proofread, Meade had this to say:
“It was nothing we ever expected or asked about specifically, so I would say that for the most part, traditional publishers don’t know whether you’ve had these services and definitely don’t require them. That said, the manuscripts submitted to me in-house were in solid shape (mostly error-free) because they’d already been through the rigorous editorial stages with their agent (and before). The reality is that a manuscript riddled with grammatical and technical errors is certainly going to have a harder time generating enthusiasm, so it’s worthwhile to get yours as clean as possible before going into querying.”
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